Rusty old keys
play through yellow melancholic reflections
as dusk arrives,
forgotten nostalgic rhythms
open floodgates of hopeful notes
on dejected nights
This one uses the Collom Lune form. The original Lune form invented by Robert Kelly uses two stanzas of 3,5,3 syllables. The form that I have used is a modified form by the poet Jack Collom. It uses 3,5,3 words instead of the Kelly syllable rule in the two stanzas of three lines.
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